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SOFT WORDS
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
I enjoy hearing you for long time
Can you look at me please merrily?
I enjoy seeing you in the prime
When you want to walk swing and swing
Every thing in the world is worthless
When you want to speak only sing
You have – in lovely songs –more clearness
our life is like a night mare
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Nice!
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Thanks my friend.
our life is like a night mare
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Very Good
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Thanks sunnypk ,ur very kind and gentle.
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Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
our life is like a night mare
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hi
one day we will regret koz we spend our life afraid to speak frankly.

c u & good luck
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hi my friends
we must meet every time every hour every second
i hope so
good luck
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hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
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i think its good and have different taste
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greeting friend, beautiful poem but you should improve your ability a bit littre to can send what do you want send , and i wish good luck to you
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hi friend
thnx 4 this advice and plz send me ur comment and how to improve the ability
u can also send me what is the weak line in the poem
thnx again
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hi
your words are also soft
hhhhh
c u
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hello
thnx u toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
gd luck
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I feel great :-D
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I have come to help you reply to the kind-hearted people you have a great Thank you, Bai Bai {-:
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one day we will regret koz we spend our life afraid to speak frankly.[/b]
these words are soft
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Nice poem
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hello every one
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hello all
plz show me ur comment
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shakespear wrote:SOFT WORDS
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
I enjoy hearing you for long time
Can you look at me please merrily?
I enjoy seeing you in the prime
When you want to walk swing and swing
Every thing in the world is worthless
When you want to speak only sing
You have – in lovely songs –more clearness

short poem...written in college
our life is like a night mare
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