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MEETING IN THE NIGHT
HE TOSSED OFF HIS RING;
THEN TOOK TO THE STREETS.
THOUGH HE LOOKED GREEN,
HIS HEART WAS MEAN.

A WHITE SHIRT HE WORE;
AND BLACK JEANS FOR SURE.
HE ROAMED ROUND THE WORLD;
THEN MET A LITTLE WHORE.

HER DRESS WAS A MESS,
I GUESS SHE CARED NOT
FOR OUT WERE HER BREASTS
AND ALL SHE GOT.

WITH A WATERY MOUTH
HE SHOUTED WOW
AND LEAPED INTO HER DEN,
THAT WAS THE END. BY: S.J ANNE

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Poem is a great work, simple and colorful expression. Common happenings in the lives of materialistic lovers are beautifully presented. Rhyme and tone is really good. Typical masculine traits are wonderfully portrayed. Presence and inevitability of female in one or the other firm, shape or tone is displaying strong feminist concerns.