Hi,
I wrote a paragraph . Could you please correct and give some tips to improve my skill.
There was a purple bud.
That's pretty much it.
I picked it for me
Then I realized
I killed a bud before Bloss.
But I couldn't replace it.
Even my tears were not as
precious as bud life.
The purple bud.
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